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英语六级:2016年6月英语六级作文真题及范文分析

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英语写作:商务邮件的万能例句

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考研英语:高分作文有招数!

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   考研冲刺阶段,想要英语作文的分数快速提高,就得有技巧性地备考,高分作文必须既要明确主旨,又要写得引人入胜。文章到底如何润色,下面教你高分作文必须具备的4大招数!

1、书写规范书面语


   考生千万要注意,这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误,那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知,书面英语和口语有很大区别,有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语,所以需要引起考生的注意。

2、紧握一条时态主线


   时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点,有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态,将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句:

This great loss had kill Mrs. white, but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)

This great loss had killed Mrs. white, but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)

建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中,尽量紧握一条时态主线,一是来写起来操作性强,二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是:一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。

3、闪光词汇必不可少


   在考场作文中,but 、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神,直接将文章打为C类,而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮,尤其是真题中文章的精彩表述方式,考生要勤加总结。

4、增强语言说服力


   在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候,考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服,那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力,如何增强呢?小编有两个好方法,一是引用名人话语,二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力,使文章不再“徒有其表”。

“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University’s business school.(2007年阅读理解Text 4) 真题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则,从侧面说明作者观点,同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。

被动句也是一个很好的法宝,将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述,我们看下面的例子:

We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)

Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)

可以看出,被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是,不要过多使用,每篇出现两至三个比较合适,过犹不及。多使用被动句,让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。





 
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   考研冲刺阶段,想要英语作文的分数快速提高,就得有技巧性地备考,高分作文必须既要明确主旨,又要写得引人入胜。文章到底如何润色,下面教你高分作文必须具备的4大招数!


1、书写规范书面语



   考生千万要注意,这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误,那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知,书面英语和口语有很大区别,有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语,所以需要引起考生的注意。


2、紧握一条时态主线



   时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点,有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态,将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句:

This great loss had kill Mrs. white, but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)

This great loss had killed Mrs. white, but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)

建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中,尽量紧握一条时态主线,一是来写起来操作性强,二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是:一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。


3、闪光词汇必不可少



   在考场作文中,but 、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神,直接将文章打为C类,而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮,尤其是真题中文章的精彩表述方式,考生要勤加总结。


4、增强语言说服力



   在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候,考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服,那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力,如何增强呢?小编有两个好方法,一是引用名人话语,二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力,使文章不再“徒有其表”。

“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University’s business school.(2007年阅读理解Text 4) 真题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则,从侧面说明作者观点,同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。

被动句也是一个很好的法宝,将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述,我们看下面的例子:

We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)

Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)

可以看出,被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是,不要过多使用,每篇出现两至三个比较合适,过犹不及。多使用被动句,让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。

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双语阅读:爱因斯坦给自己女儿的一封信

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在上世纪80年代末,丽瑟尔,那个著名天才的女儿,她为希伯来大学捐赠了1400封其父亲书写的信,要求在爱因斯坦去世后20年内不得公布其内容。这是众多信件当中的一封——《致丽瑟尔·爱因斯坦》。


When I proposed the theory of relativity, very few understood me, and what I will reveal now to transmit to mankind will also collide with the misunderstanding and prejudice in the world.
当我提出相对论时,几乎很少有人能够理解我所说的,而我现在向全人类揭示的理论将会与世人对此的误解与偏见格格不入。

I ask you to guard the letters as long as necessary, years, decades, until society is advanced enough to accept what I will explain below.
我要求你保护好这些信件,直到社会发展的足够现代化可以接受我下面要解释的话的时候,才可以公布,有必要话,哪怕几年,几十年,都要守护着它们。

There is an extremely powerful force that, so far, science has not found a formal explanation to. It is a force that includes and governs all others, and is even behind any phenomenon operating in the universe and has not yet been identified by us. This universal force is LOVE.
到目前来看,有一种异常强大的力量,科学上对其还没找到一种合理的解释。它是一种囊括和掌管着所有人的力量,甚至能够躲藏在任一宇宙运动现象的背后,且仍未被我们认知。这种万能的力量就是爱。

When scientists looked for a unified theory of the universe they forgot the most powerful unseen force. Love is Light, that enlightens those who give and receive it. Love is gravity, because it makes some people feel attracted to others. Love is power, because it multiplies the best we have, and allows humanity not to be extinguished in their blind selfishness.
当科学家们忙于寻找宇宙真理时,他们忘了这种最强大的无形之力。爱可以是光,照亮所有给予和收获它的人。爱可以是重力,因为它产生了一种吸引力。爱还可以是力量,因为让我们所拥有的成倍增加,使人性免于在盲目的自私中灭绝。

Love unfolds and reveals. For love we live and die. Love is God and God is Love.
爱揭示一切真理。我们为爱而生,也因爱而死。爱是上帝,上帝是爱。

This force explains everything and gives meaning to life. This is the variable that we have ignored for too long, maybe because we are afraid of love because it is the only energy in the universe that man has not learned to drive at will.
这种力量解释了一切,也赋予了生命的意义。我们早已忽视这种力量的变化太久太久了,也许是因为我们惶恐去爱,因为它是宇宙中唯一人类还没有学会游刃有余去掌握的力量。

To give visibility to love, I made a simple substitution in my most famous equation. If instead of E = mc2, we accept that the energy to heal the world can be obtained through love multiplied by the speed of light squared, we arrive at the conclusion that love is the most powerful force there is, because it has no limits.
为了能把爱清晰的表现出来,我在自己最著名的方程式中做了一个简单的替换。如果我们接受爱乘以光速的平方来代替E = MC2,那么这个等式的能量可以达到治愈整个世界的目的,所以我们得出的结论是,爱是最强大的力量,因为它无边无际。

After the failure of humanity in the use and control of the other forces of the universe that have turned against us, it is urgent that we nourish ourselves with another kind of energy…
当人类试图控制使用宇宙中对抗我们的力量却遭遇失败时,我们必须赶紧用另一种能量治愈。

If we want our species to survive, if we are to find meaning in life, if we want to save the world and every sentient being that inhabits it, love is the one and only answer.
如果我们希望万物得以存活,希望找到生存的意义,希望拯救世界以及世上每个有意识的生命,爱是唯一的答案。

Perhaps we are not yet ready to make a bomb of love, a device powerful enough to entirely destroy the hate, selfishness and greed that devastate the planet.
也许我们仍没有准备好去制造一颗爱的炸弹,以用来彻底的摧毁掉被仇恨、自私和贪婪所蹂躏的星球。

However, each individual carries within them a small but powerful generator of love whose energy is waiting to be released.
然而,每一个人都有一种小巧而又强大如发电机般的爱,它住在心里正等待着被人们释放出来。

When we learn to give and receive this universal energy, dear Lieserl, we will have affirmed that love conquers all, is able to transcend everything and anything, because love is the quintessence of life.
当我们学会给予和接受这股力量的时候,我亲爱的丽瑟尔,我们可以说,爱能战胜一切,能超越所有的一切,因为爱是生命的精髓!

I deeply regret not having been able to express what is in my heart, which has quietly beaten for you all my life. Maybe it's too late to apologize, but as time is relative, I need to tell you that I love you and thanks to you I have reached the ultimate answer!
我最大的遗憾是没能在生前表达出我内心的话,但我整个人生早已默默地为你感到骄傲。也许现在道歉已经太迟了,但随着时间的推移,我想告诉你女儿我爱你,感谢你,我已经得到了最终的答案!

Your father,
你的父亲

Albert Einstein
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在上世纪80年代末,丽瑟尔,那个著名天才的女儿,她为希伯来大学捐赠了1400封其父亲书写的信,要求在爱因斯坦去世后20年内不得公布其内容。这是众多信件当中的一封——《致丽瑟尔·爱因斯坦》。



When I proposed the theory of relativity, very few understood me, and what I will reveal now to transmit to mankind will also collide with the misunderstanding and prejudice in the world.
当我提出相对论时,几乎很少有人能够理解我所说的,而我现在向全人类揭示的理论将会与世人对此的误解与偏见格格不入。

I ask you to guard the letters as long as necessary, years, decades, until society is advanced enough to accept what I will explain below.
我要求你保护好这些信件,直到社会发展的足够现代化可以接受我下面要解释的话的时候,才可以公布,有必要话,哪怕几年,几十年,都要守护着它们。

There is an extremely powerful force that, so far, science has not found a formal explanation to. It is a force that includes and governs all others, and is even behind any phenomenon operating in the universe and has not yet been identified by us. This universal force is LOVE.
到目前来看,有一种异常强大的力量,科学上对其还没找到一种合理的解释。它是一种囊括和掌管着所有人的力量,甚至能够躲藏在任一宇宙运动现象的背后,且仍未被我们认知。这种万能的力量就是爱。

When scientists looked for a unified theory of the universe they forgot the most powerful unseen force. Love is Light, that enlightens those who give and receive it. Love is gravity, because it makes some people feel attracted to others. Love is power, because it multiplies the best we have, and allows humanity not to be extinguished in their blind selfishness.
当科学家们忙于寻找宇宙真理时,他们忘了这种最强大的无形之力。爱可以是光,照亮所有给予和收获它的人。爱可以是重力,因为它产生了一种吸引力。爱还可以是力量,因为让我们所拥有的成倍增加,使人性免于在盲目的自私中灭绝。

Love unfolds and reveals. For love we live and die. Love is God and God is Love.
爱揭示一切真理。我们为爱而生,也因爱而死。爱是上帝,上帝是爱。

This force explains everything and gives meaning to life. This is the variable that we have ignored for too long, maybe because we are afraid of love because it is the only energy in the universe that man has not learned to drive at will.
这种力量解释了一切,也赋予了生命的意义。我们早已忽视这种力量的变化太久太久了,也许是因为我们惶恐去爱,因为它是宇宙中唯一人类还没有学会游刃有余去掌握的力量。

To give visibility to love, I made a simple substitution in my most famous equation. If instead of E = mc2, we accept that the energy to heal the world can be obtained through love multiplied by the speed of light squared, we arrive at the conclusion that love is the most powerful force there is, because it has no limits.
为了能把爱清晰的表现出来,我在自己最著名的方程式中做了一个简单的替换。如果我们接受爱乘以光速的平方来代替E = MC2,那么这个等式的能量可以达到治愈整个世界的目的,所以我们得出的结论是,爱是最强大的力量,因为它无边无际。

After the failure of humanity in the use and control of the other forces of the universe that have turned against us, it is urgent that we nourish ourselves with another kind of energy…
当人类试图控制使用宇宙中对抗我们的力量却遭遇失败时,我们必须赶紧用另一种能量治愈。

If we want our species to survive, if we are to find meaning in life, if we want to save the world and every sentient being that inhabits it, love is the one and only answer.
如果我们希望万物得以存活,希望找到生存的意义,希望拯救世界以及世上每个有意识的生命,爱是唯一的答案。

Perhaps we are not yet ready to make a bomb of love, a device powerful enough to entirely destroy the hate, selfishness and greed that devastate the planet.
也许我们仍没有准备好去制造一颗爱的炸弹,以用来彻底的摧毁掉被仇恨、自私和贪婪所蹂躏的星球。

However, each individual carries within them a small but powerful generator of love whose energy is waiting to be released.
然而,每一个人都有一种小巧而又强大如发电机般的爱,它住在心里正等待着被人们释放出来。

When we learn to give and receive this universal energy, dear Lieserl, we will have affirmed that love conquers all, is able to transcend everything and anything, because love is the quintessence of life.
当我们学会给予和接受这股力量的时候,我亲爱的丽瑟尔,我们可以说,爱能战胜一切,能超越所有的一切,因为爱是生命的精髓!

I deeply regret not having been able to express what is in my heart, which has quietly beaten for you all my life. Maybe it's too late to apologize, but as time is relative, I need to tell you that I love you and thanks to you I have reached the ultimate answer!
我最大的遗憾是没能在生前表达出我内心的话,但我整个人生早已默默地为你感到骄傲。也许现在道歉已经太迟了,但随着时间的推移,我想告诉你女儿我爱你,感谢你,我已经得到了最终的答案!

Your father,
你的父亲

Albert Einstein
阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦

商务英语写作:9个关于英文邮件写作的强大例句

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1. Thanks note 感谢信

Thank you so much for the cooperation。

感谢你的合作!

I really appreciate the effort you all made for this sudden and tight project。

对如此紧急的项目您做出的努力我表示十分感谢。

Thanks for your attention!

谢谢关心!

Your kind assistance on this are very much appreciated。

我们对您的协助表示感谢。

Really appreciate your help!

非常感谢您的帮助!
 

2. Seeking for more information/feedbacks/suggestions 咨询信息/反馈/建议

Shall you have any problem accessing the folders, please let me know.

如果存取文件有任何问题请和我联系。

Thank you and look forward to having your opinion on the estimation and schedule。

谢谢你,希望能听到更多你对评估和日程计划的建议。

Look forward to your feedbacks and suggestions soon。

期待您的反馈建议!

What is your opinion on the schedule and next steps we proposed?

你对计划方面有什么想法?下一步我们应该怎么做?

What do you think about this?

这个你怎么想?

Feel free to give your comments。

请随意提出您的建议。

Any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Any question, please let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Please contact me if you have any questions。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Your comments and suggestions are welcome!

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Please let me know what you think?

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Do you have any idea about this?

对于这个您有什么建议吗?

It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the user’s behavior。

您若是能够就用户行为方面提供更多的信息就太感激了!

At your convenience, I would really appreciate you looking into this matter/issue。

如果可以,我希望你能负责这件事情。
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1. Thanks note 感谢信


Thank you so much for the cooperation。

感谢你的合作!

I really appreciate the effort you all made for this sudden and tight project。

对如此紧急的项目您做出的努力我表示十分感谢。

Thanks for your attention!

谢谢关心!

Your kind assistance on this are very much appreciated。

我们对您的协助表示感谢。

Really appreciate your help!

非常感谢您的帮助!
 


2. Seeking for more information/feedbacks/suggestions 咨询信息/反馈/建议


Shall you have any problem accessing the folders, please let me know.

如果存取文件有任何问题请和我联系。

Thank you and look forward to having your opinion on the estimation and schedule。

谢谢你,希望能听到更多你对评估和日程计划的建议。

Look forward to your feedbacks and suggestions soon。

期待您的反馈建议!

What is your opinion on the schedule and next steps we proposed?

你对计划方面有什么想法?下一步我们应该怎么做?

What do you think about this?

这个你怎么想?

Feel free to give your comments。

请随意提出您的建议。

Any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Any question, please let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Please contact me if you have any questions。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Your comments and suggestions are welcome!

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Please let me know what you think?

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Do you have any idea about this?

对于这个您有什么建议吗?

It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the user’s behavior。

您若是能够就用户行为方面提供更多的信息就太感激了!

At your convenience, I would really appreciate you looking into this matter/issue。

如果可以,我希望你能负责这件事情。
 

英语六级:六级写作想要高分就不要用这些“高频词”了!

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英语学习:阅读天天练(附答案)

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英语阅读想要提高,其实就是要不断地积累阅读素材,提高阅读素养。把一篇英语美文精读3遍,总比盲目地刷题一百遍来得强。精读一篇文章,我们可以认识本来不懂的新单词,也可以熟悉英语写作及手法的思维,培养语感,也为英语写作积累素材。
下面是一篇典型的英语精读阅读文章,我们可以按照这种方式进行阅读训练,希望帮到大家。
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英语阅读想要提高,其实就是要不断地积累阅读素材,提高阅读素养。把一篇英语美文精读3遍,总比盲目地刷题一百遍来得强。精读一篇文章,我们可以认识本来不懂的新单词,也可以熟悉英语写作及手法的思维,培养语感,也为英语写作积累素材。
下面是一篇典型的英语精读阅读文章,我们可以按照这种方式进行阅读训练,希望帮到大家。
 

双语阅读:如何提高英语写作水平

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英语写作:同一个事物也有不同描述和表达,你学了吗?

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英语六级:2016年6月英语六级作文真题及范文分析

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英语写作:商务邮件的万能例句

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英语六级阅读和写作中常用的逻辑关系

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英语六级:六级写作想要高分就不要用这些“高频词”了!

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考研英语:高分作文有招数!

英语写作文艺的小逗比 发表了文章 • 0 个评论 • 1088 次浏览 • 2017-07-12 16:08 • 来自相关话题

 
   考研冲刺阶段,想要英语作文的分数快速提高,就得有技巧性地备考,高分作文必须既要明确主旨,又要写得引人入胜。文章到底如何润色,下面教你高分作文必须具备的4大招数!

1、书写规范书面语


   考生千万要注意,这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误,那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知,书面英语和口语有很大区别,有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语,所以需要引起考生的注意。

2、紧握一条时态主线


   时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点,有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态,将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句:

This great loss had kill Mrs. white, but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)

This great loss had killed Mrs. white, but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)

建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中,尽量紧握一条时态主线,一是来写起来操作性强,二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是:一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。

3、闪光词汇必不可少


   在考场作文中,but 、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神,直接将文章打为C类,而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮,尤其是真题中文章的精彩表述方式,考生要勤加总结。

4、增强语言说服力


   在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候,考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服,那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力,如何增强呢?小编有两个好方法,一是引用名人话语,二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力,使文章不再“徒有其表”。

“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University’s business school.(2007年阅读理解Text 4) 真题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则,从侧面说明作者观点,同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。

被动句也是一个很好的法宝,将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述,我们看下面的例子:

We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)

Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)

可以看出,被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是,不要过多使用,每篇出现两至三个比较合适,过犹不及。多使用被动句,让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。





 
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   考研冲刺阶段,想要英语作文的分数快速提高,就得有技巧性地备考,高分作文必须既要明确主旨,又要写得引人入胜。文章到底如何润色,下面教你高分作文必须具备的4大招数!


1、书写规范书面语



   考生千万要注意,这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误,那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知,书面英语和口语有很大区别,有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语,所以需要引起考生的注意。


2、紧握一条时态主线



   时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点,有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态,将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句:

This great loss had kill Mrs. white, but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)

This great loss had killed Mrs. white, but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)

建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中,尽量紧握一条时态主线,一是来写起来操作性强,二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是:一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。


3、闪光词汇必不可少



   在考场作文中,but 、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神,直接将文章打为C类,而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮,尤其是真题中文章的精彩表述方式,考生要勤加总结。


4、增强语言说服力



   在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候,考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服,那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力,如何增强呢?小编有两个好方法,一是引用名人话语,二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力,使文章不再“徒有其表”。

“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University’s business school.(2007年阅读理解Text 4) 真题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则,从侧面说明作者观点,同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。

被动句也是一个很好的法宝,将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述,我们看下面的例子:

We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)

Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)

可以看出,被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是,不要过多使用,每篇出现两至三个比较合适,过犹不及。多使用被动句,让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。

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双语阅读:爱因斯坦给自己女儿的一封信

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在上世纪80年代末,丽瑟尔,那个著名天才的女儿,她为希伯来大学捐赠了1400封其父亲书写的信,要求在爱因斯坦去世后20年内不得公布其内容。这是众多信件当中的一封——《致丽瑟尔·爱因斯坦》。


When I proposed the theory of relativity, very few understood me, and what I will reveal now to transmit to mankind will also collide with the misunderstanding and prejudice in the world.
当我提出相对论时,几乎很少有人能够理解我所说的,而我现在向全人类揭示的理论将会与世人对此的误解与偏见格格不入。

I ask you to guard the letters as long as necessary, years, decades, until society is advanced enough to accept what I will explain below.
我要求你保护好这些信件,直到社会发展的足够现代化可以接受我下面要解释的话的时候,才可以公布,有必要话,哪怕几年,几十年,都要守护着它们。

There is an extremely powerful force that, so far, science has not found a formal explanation to. It is a force that includes and governs all others, and is even behind any phenomenon operating in the universe and has not yet been identified by us. This universal force is LOVE.
到目前来看,有一种异常强大的力量,科学上对其还没找到一种合理的解释。它是一种囊括和掌管着所有人的力量,甚至能够躲藏在任一宇宙运动现象的背后,且仍未被我们认知。这种万能的力量就是爱。

When scientists looked for a unified theory of the universe they forgot the most powerful unseen force. Love is Light, that enlightens those who give and receive it. Love is gravity, because it makes some people feel attracted to others. Love is power, because it multiplies the best we have, and allows humanity not to be extinguished in their blind selfishness.
当科学家们忙于寻找宇宙真理时,他们忘了这种最强大的无形之力。爱可以是光,照亮所有给予和收获它的人。爱可以是重力,因为它产生了一种吸引力。爱还可以是力量,因为让我们所拥有的成倍增加,使人性免于在盲目的自私中灭绝。

Love unfolds and reveals. For love we live and die. Love is God and God is Love.
爱揭示一切真理。我们为爱而生,也因爱而死。爱是上帝,上帝是爱。

This force explains everything and gives meaning to life. This is the variable that we have ignored for too long, maybe because we are afraid of love because it is the only energy in the universe that man has not learned to drive at will.
这种力量解释了一切,也赋予了生命的意义。我们早已忽视这种力量的变化太久太久了,也许是因为我们惶恐去爱,因为它是宇宙中唯一人类还没有学会游刃有余去掌握的力量。

To give visibility to love, I made a simple substitution in my most famous equation. If instead of E = mc2, we accept that the energy to heal the world can be obtained through love multiplied by the speed of light squared, we arrive at the conclusion that love is the most powerful force there is, because it has no limits.
为了能把爱清晰的表现出来,我在自己最著名的方程式中做了一个简单的替换。如果我们接受爱乘以光速的平方来代替E = MC2,那么这个等式的能量可以达到治愈整个世界的目的,所以我们得出的结论是,爱是最强大的力量,因为它无边无际。

After the failure of humanity in the use and control of the other forces of the universe that have turned against us, it is urgent that we nourish ourselves with another kind of energy…
当人类试图控制使用宇宙中对抗我们的力量却遭遇失败时,我们必须赶紧用另一种能量治愈。

If we want our species to survive, if we are to find meaning in life, if we want to save the world and every sentient being that inhabits it, love is the one and only answer.
如果我们希望万物得以存活,希望找到生存的意义,希望拯救世界以及世上每个有意识的生命,爱是唯一的答案。

Perhaps we are not yet ready to make a bomb of love, a device powerful enough to entirely destroy the hate, selfishness and greed that devastate the planet.
也许我们仍没有准备好去制造一颗爱的炸弹,以用来彻底的摧毁掉被仇恨、自私和贪婪所蹂躏的星球。

However, each individual carries within them a small but powerful generator of love whose energy is waiting to be released.
然而,每一个人都有一种小巧而又强大如发电机般的爱,它住在心里正等待着被人们释放出来。

When we learn to give and receive this universal energy, dear Lieserl, we will have affirmed that love conquers all, is able to transcend everything and anything, because love is the quintessence of life.
当我们学会给予和接受这股力量的时候,我亲爱的丽瑟尔,我们可以说,爱能战胜一切,能超越所有的一切,因为爱是生命的精髓!

I deeply regret not having been able to express what is in my heart, which has quietly beaten for you all my life. Maybe it's too late to apologize, but as time is relative, I need to tell you that I love you and thanks to you I have reached the ultimate answer!
我最大的遗憾是没能在生前表达出我内心的话,但我整个人生早已默默地为你感到骄傲。也许现在道歉已经太迟了,但随着时间的推移,我想告诉你女儿我爱你,感谢你,我已经得到了最终的答案!

Your father,
你的父亲

Albert Einstein
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在上世纪80年代末,丽瑟尔,那个著名天才的女儿,她为希伯来大学捐赠了1400封其父亲书写的信,要求在爱因斯坦去世后20年内不得公布其内容。这是众多信件当中的一封——《致丽瑟尔·爱因斯坦》。



When I proposed the theory of relativity, very few understood me, and what I will reveal now to transmit to mankind will also collide with the misunderstanding and prejudice in the world.
当我提出相对论时,几乎很少有人能够理解我所说的,而我现在向全人类揭示的理论将会与世人对此的误解与偏见格格不入。

I ask you to guard the letters as long as necessary, years, decades, until society is advanced enough to accept what I will explain below.
我要求你保护好这些信件,直到社会发展的足够现代化可以接受我下面要解释的话的时候,才可以公布,有必要话,哪怕几年,几十年,都要守护着它们。

There is an extremely powerful force that, so far, science has not found a formal explanation to. It is a force that includes and governs all others, and is even behind any phenomenon operating in the universe and has not yet been identified by us. This universal force is LOVE.
到目前来看,有一种异常强大的力量,科学上对其还没找到一种合理的解释。它是一种囊括和掌管着所有人的力量,甚至能够躲藏在任一宇宙运动现象的背后,且仍未被我们认知。这种万能的力量就是爱。

When scientists looked for a unified theory of the universe they forgot the most powerful unseen force. Love is Light, that enlightens those who give and receive it. Love is gravity, because it makes some people feel attracted to others. Love is power, because it multiplies the best we have, and allows humanity not to be extinguished in their blind selfishness.
当科学家们忙于寻找宇宙真理时,他们忘了这种最强大的无形之力。爱可以是光,照亮所有给予和收获它的人。爱可以是重力,因为它产生了一种吸引力。爱还可以是力量,因为让我们所拥有的成倍增加,使人性免于在盲目的自私中灭绝。

Love unfolds and reveals. For love we live and die. Love is God and God is Love.
爱揭示一切真理。我们为爱而生,也因爱而死。爱是上帝,上帝是爱。

This force explains everything and gives meaning to life. This is the variable that we have ignored for too long, maybe because we are afraid of love because it is the only energy in the universe that man has not learned to drive at will.
这种力量解释了一切,也赋予了生命的意义。我们早已忽视这种力量的变化太久太久了,也许是因为我们惶恐去爱,因为它是宇宙中唯一人类还没有学会游刃有余去掌握的力量。

To give visibility to love, I made a simple substitution in my most famous equation. If instead of E = mc2, we accept that the energy to heal the world can be obtained through love multiplied by the speed of light squared, we arrive at the conclusion that love is the most powerful force there is, because it has no limits.
为了能把爱清晰的表现出来,我在自己最著名的方程式中做了一个简单的替换。如果我们接受爱乘以光速的平方来代替E = MC2,那么这个等式的能量可以达到治愈整个世界的目的,所以我们得出的结论是,爱是最强大的力量,因为它无边无际。

After the failure of humanity in the use and control of the other forces of the universe that have turned against us, it is urgent that we nourish ourselves with another kind of energy…
当人类试图控制使用宇宙中对抗我们的力量却遭遇失败时,我们必须赶紧用另一种能量治愈。

If we want our species to survive, if we are to find meaning in life, if we want to save the world and every sentient being that inhabits it, love is the one and only answer.
如果我们希望万物得以存活,希望找到生存的意义,希望拯救世界以及世上每个有意识的生命,爱是唯一的答案。

Perhaps we are not yet ready to make a bomb of love, a device powerful enough to entirely destroy the hate, selfishness and greed that devastate the planet.
也许我们仍没有准备好去制造一颗爱的炸弹,以用来彻底的摧毁掉被仇恨、自私和贪婪所蹂躏的星球。

However, each individual carries within them a small but powerful generator of love whose energy is waiting to be released.
然而,每一个人都有一种小巧而又强大如发电机般的爱,它住在心里正等待着被人们释放出来。

When we learn to give and receive this universal energy, dear Lieserl, we will have affirmed that love conquers all, is able to transcend everything and anything, because love is the quintessence of life.
当我们学会给予和接受这股力量的时候,我亲爱的丽瑟尔,我们可以说,爱能战胜一切,能超越所有的一切,因为爱是生命的精髓!

I deeply regret not having been able to express what is in my heart, which has quietly beaten for you all my life. Maybe it's too late to apologize, but as time is relative, I need to tell you that I love you and thanks to you I have reached the ultimate answer!
我最大的遗憾是没能在生前表达出我内心的话,但我整个人生早已默默地为你感到骄傲。也许现在道歉已经太迟了,但随着时间的推移,我想告诉你女儿我爱你,感谢你,我已经得到了最终的答案!

Your father,
你的父亲

Albert Einstein
阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦

商务英语写作:9个关于英文邮件写作的强大例句

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1. Thanks note 感谢信

Thank you so much for the cooperation。

感谢你的合作!

I really appreciate the effort you all made for this sudden and tight project。

对如此紧急的项目您做出的努力我表示十分感谢。

Thanks for your attention!

谢谢关心!

Your kind assistance on this are very much appreciated。

我们对您的协助表示感谢。

Really appreciate your help!

非常感谢您的帮助!
 

2. Seeking for more information/feedbacks/suggestions 咨询信息/反馈/建议

Shall you have any problem accessing the folders, please let me know.

如果存取文件有任何问题请和我联系。

Thank you and look forward to having your opinion on the estimation and schedule。

谢谢你,希望能听到更多你对评估和日程计划的建议。

Look forward to your feedbacks and suggestions soon。

期待您的反馈建议!

What is your opinion on the schedule and next steps we proposed?

你对计划方面有什么想法?下一步我们应该怎么做?

What do you think about this?

这个你怎么想?

Feel free to give your comments。

请随意提出您的建议。

Any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Any question, please let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Please contact me if you have any questions。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Your comments and suggestions are welcome!

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Please let me know what you think?

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Do you have any idea about this?

对于这个您有什么建议吗?

It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the user’s behavior。

您若是能够就用户行为方面提供更多的信息就太感激了!

At your convenience, I would really appreciate you looking into this matter/issue。

如果可以,我希望你能负责这件事情。
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1. Thanks note 感谢信


Thank you so much for the cooperation。

感谢你的合作!

I really appreciate the effort you all made for this sudden and tight project。

对如此紧急的项目您做出的努力我表示十分感谢。

Thanks for your attention!

谢谢关心!

Your kind assistance on this are very much appreciated。

我们对您的协助表示感谢。

Really appreciate your help!

非常感谢您的帮助!
 


2. Seeking for more information/feedbacks/suggestions 咨询信息/反馈/建议


Shall you have any problem accessing the folders, please let me know.

如果存取文件有任何问题请和我联系。

Thank you and look forward to having your opinion on the estimation and schedule。

谢谢你,希望能听到更多你对评估和日程计划的建议。

Look forward to your feedbacks and suggestions soon。

期待您的反馈建议!

What is your opinion on the schedule and next steps we proposed?

你对计划方面有什么想法?下一步我们应该怎么做?

What do you think about this?

这个你怎么想?

Feel free to give your comments。

请随意提出您的建议。

Any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Any question, please let me know。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Please contact me if you have any questions。

有任何问题,欢迎和我们联系。

Your comments and suggestions are welcome!

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Please let me know what you think?

欢迎您的评论和建议!

Do you have any idea about this?

对于这个您有什么建议吗?

It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the user’s behavior。

您若是能够就用户行为方面提供更多的信息就太感激了!

At your convenience, I would really appreciate you looking into this matter/issue。

如果可以,我希望你能负责这件事情。
 

英语学习:阅读天天练(附答案)

英语学习cara_wu 发表了文章 • 4 个评论 • 1192 次浏览 • 2017-07-03 16:17 • 来自相关话题

英语阅读想要提高,其实就是要不断地积累阅读素材,提高阅读素养。把一篇英语美文精读3遍,总比盲目地刷题一百遍来得强。精读一篇文章,我们可以认识本来不懂的新单词,也可以熟悉英语写作及手法的思维,培养语感,也为英语写作积累素材。
下面是一篇典型的英语精读阅读文章,我们可以按照这种方式进行阅读训练,希望帮到大家。
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英语阅读想要提高,其实就是要不断地积累阅读素材,提高阅读素养。把一篇英语美文精读3遍,总比盲目地刷题一百遍来得强。精读一篇文章,我们可以认识本来不懂的新单词,也可以熟悉英语写作及手法的思维,培养语感,也为英语写作积累素材。
下面是一篇典型的英语精读阅读文章,我们可以按照这种方式进行阅读训练,希望帮到大家。
 

双语演讲:2016年特朗普感恩节演讲

英语演讲文艺的小逗比 发表了文章 • 0 个评论 • 1130 次浏览 • 2017-06-15 16:43 • 来自相关话题

感恩节前夕,候任总统唐纳德•特朗普发表讲话,呼吁美国民众弥合分歧。在视频中,特朗普号召国民在持续数周对总统选举团进行抗议和请愿之后能够再一次团结起来。
川普说:“我们非常有幸能称这个国家为我们的家。这就是美国:她是我们的家。我们在这里成家立业、照顾亲人、关心邻里、实现梦想。我在这个感恩节祈祷,我们开始弥合分歧,带着共同的目标和决心,团结一致,让国家向前迈进,更加强大。”

We are very blessed to call this nation our home. And that is what America is: it is our home. It’s where we raise our families, care for our loved ones, look out for our neighbors, and live out our dreams.

我们很幸运地称这个国家为家园,这就是美国,这是我们的家园。我们在这里安家、关心我们所爱之人、照顾友邻,并活出我们的梦想。

It is my prayer, that on this Thanksgiving, we begin to heal our divisions and move forward as one country, strengthened by a shared purpose and very, very common resolve.

我祷告在今年的感恩节,我们开始弥合分歧,以一个国家的姿态继续前进,拥有共同目的和共同的决心。

In declaring this national holiday, President Lincoln called upon Americans to speak with “one voice and one heart.” That’s just what we have to do.

宣布这个国家节日时,林肯总统呼吁美国人齐力发声,并团结一心,我们就该如此。(这里川普引用了林肯1864年的感恩节讲话,当时美国正值内战时期,林肯宣布将感恩节定为全国性节日。)

We have just finished a long and bruising political campaign. Emotions are raw and tensions just don’t heal overnight. It doesn’t go quickly, unfortunately, but we have before us the chance now to make history together to bring real change to Washington, real safety to our cities, and real prosperity to our communities, including our inner cities. So important to me, and so important to our country. But to succeed, we must enlist the effort of our entire nation.

我们才刚刚结束了一场漫长又激烈的政治竞选,人民情绪强烈,紧张局势不会在一夜之间消除。不幸的是,这一切不会马上消失。但现在在我们眼前有一起创造历史的机会,为美国带来真正的改变,为各大城市带来真正的安全,为内陆城市等各群体带来真正的繁荣。这对我和我们的国家而言,都非常重要。但是要成功,我们必须争取全国上下共同努力。

This historic political campaign is now over. Now begins a great national campaign to rebuild our country and to restore the full promise of America for all of our people.

如今这个历史性的政治竞选结束了,但现在重建我们国家的伟大运动开始了,并恢复美国对所有人民的承诺。

I am asking you to join me in this effort. It is time to restore the bonds of trust between citizens. Because when America is unified, there is nothing beyond our reach, and I mean absolutely nothing.

我希望你们加入我,共同努力。是时候恢复公民之间信任的纽带了。因为只要美国人民团结一致,没有我们做不到的事儿——我是指任何事儿。

Let us give thanks for all that we have, and let us boldly face the exciting new frontiers that lie ahead.

让我们感恩所拥有的一切,让我们大胆面对前方令人兴奋的新领域。

Thank you. God Bless You and God Bless America.

感谢你们,上帝保佑你们,天佑美国。 查看全部

感恩节前夕,候任总统唐纳德•特朗普发表讲话,呼吁美国民众弥合分歧。在视频中,特朗普号召国民在持续数周对总统选举团进行抗议和请愿之后能够再一次团结起来。
川普说:“我们非常有幸能称这个国家为我们的家。这就是美国:她是我们的家。我们在这里成家立业、照顾亲人、关心邻里、实现梦想。我在这个感恩节祈祷,我们开始弥合分歧,带着共同的目标和决心,团结一致,让国家向前迈进,更加强大。”

We are very blessed to call this nation our home. And that is what America is: it is our home. It’s where we raise our families, care for our loved ones, look out for our neighbors, and live out our dreams.

我们很幸运地称这个国家为家园,这就是美国,这是我们的家园。我们在这里安家、关心我们所爱之人、照顾友邻,并活出我们的梦想。

It is my prayer, that on this Thanksgiving, we begin to heal our divisions and move forward as one country, strengthened by a shared purpose and very, very common resolve.

我祷告在今年的感恩节,我们开始弥合分歧,以一个国家的姿态继续前进,拥有共同目的和共同的决心。

In declaring this national holiday, President Lincoln called upon Americans to speak with “one voice and one heart.” That’s just what we have to do.

宣布这个国家节日时,林肯总统呼吁美国人齐力发声,并团结一心,我们就该如此。(这里川普引用了林肯1864年的感恩节讲话,当时美国正值内战时期,林肯宣布将感恩节定为全国性节日。)

We have just finished a long and bruising political campaign. Emotions are raw and tensions just don’t heal overnight. It doesn’t go quickly, unfortunately, but we have before us the chance now to make history together to bring real change to Washington, real safety to our cities, and real prosperity to our communities, including our inner cities. So important to me, and so important to our country. But to succeed, we must enlist the effort of our entire nation.

我们才刚刚结束了一场漫长又激烈的政治竞选,人民情绪强烈,紧张局势不会在一夜之间消除。不幸的是,这一切不会马上消失。但现在在我们眼前有一起创造历史的机会,为美国带来真正的改变,为各大城市带来真正的安全,为内陆城市等各群体带来真正的繁荣。这对我和我们的国家而言,都非常重要。但是要成功,我们必须争取全国上下共同努力。

This historic political campaign is now over. Now begins a great national campaign to rebuild our country and to restore the full promise of America for all of our people.

如今这个历史性的政治竞选结束了,但现在重建我们国家的伟大运动开始了,并恢复美国对所有人民的承诺。

I am asking you to join me in this effort. It is time to restore the bonds of trust between citizens. Because when America is unified, there is nothing beyond our reach, and I mean absolutely nothing.

我希望你们加入我,共同努力。是时候恢复公民之间信任的纽带了。因为只要美国人民团结一致,没有我们做不到的事儿——我是指任何事儿。

Let us give thanks for all that we have, and let us boldly face the exciting new frontiers that lie ahead.

让我们感恩所拥有的一切,让我们大胆面对前方令人兴奋的新领域。

Thank you. God Bless You and God Bless America.

感谢你们,上帝保佑你们,天佑美国。